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Sunday, 18 June 2017

misty night

One misty night I was wide awake and my belly rumbled I’d like a midnight snack. So I got up and mumbled to myself. Will I get caught? I get up and see the moon’s light gazing down on me. I walk along and I feel the mist brushing past my feet. I hear the wood creak. Yus! I made it. I grab some doritos, then... got ya! My heart is racing. I think I am going to have a heart attack.

By Hayden

I am learning how to use punctuation & brightsparks.
I am relational at punctuation & unistructural at using brightspark words.

My next steps are to use more brightspark words and more punctuation.

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